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The building often settled into the years with creaking reluctance, but the retreating breath of laughter could not be accounted for.  Upon returning my attentions to the body, her eyes had opened, fixed upon me with the lonely thorns of life relived.  A question hung between us, thin and oily.
50 word story

Trufax - I was lying half-asleep on a doctor's table when this idea came to me. Or half-dead. One wonders.
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I used to test myself with these short and uber short stories.

A story has a beginning, a middle and an end, otherwise it's just prose.

:D